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Review:LadyL8 says:
Back again :D Okay, so I will have to continue review tomorrow, cause its quite late here. I promise to review on every chapter, though :D

Okay, so what I really love is how you gave us small hints about what Hermione was going to do, and I really didnt figure it out until she did it. That was really good. I also love how you have to read a little between the lines. It doesnt say what she is going to do, you just have to figure out that part yourself. I love when people do that. It makes it so interesting.

Last chapter, I complained a little about too much description and little dialog. This chapter didnt have those problems at all. You had description, but good enough amount of it. You didnt have too much, and not too little. You also had more dialog, especially between Hermione and McGonagall, and those conversations seemed realistic. Both of them were very in-character and thats why it was so believable.

I really love that you bring Snape back. He really did deserve a second chance, and you (or rather Hermione) gave it to him. Great idea, great plot, great concept and I really liked it :D

Author's Response: Well... the way I see it, the last chapter was also all about Hermione going into this on her own. I wanted to show how she was really putting herself at risk to figure out a way to bring him back.

Thank you for another wonderful review. I can't wait to see what you have to say about the next chapters! *HUGS*

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