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Review:academica says:
Hey :)

I loved the comparison between James's young body and Sirius's form, which has been aged by time and regret. I also love that you dealt appropriately with the thing I mentioned earlier about James cheating on Lily with Sirius. That bit about "you said 'till death do you part'" was brilliant. The Sirius/Lily moment was very tender and sweet, and it's sad to think that they won't be able to enjoy those moments forever.

I really love the drama in this piece. It almost seems like a stage play, where all of the action is very tangible for me. I feel like I'm just sitting back and watching it play out right in front of me, and I'm very isolated from it and yet entirely in tune with the emotions the characters are feeling. Anyway, that was a bit of a weird statement to make, but I felt like it needed to be made.

Very well done. Again with the lovely imagery and flow :)

academica (Slytherin)

Author's Response: Hey :)

I know it seems sad that your body is frozen forever in the time that you die so I liked being able to tweak my afterlife and have Sirius's body, which as you said has been aged by time and regret, finally be young again.

I love writing stories where you feel everything...it makes me feel like I'm doing something right as a writer. I love that statement you made and it made perfect sense to me, so thanks.

I love your reviews!! Thank you so much.


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