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Review:Keira7794 says:
Very powerful!
You could feel the fresh grief coming from James and the hints made it clear that it was Albus. It's really intriging - you want to know what happened - how it happened etc.
It flows really well, my only small point (becuase I have to have one!) is to maybe mention that it is Albus,as when you mentioned Lily, i immediately thought it was Lily Potter (1) who had a brother who died etc.
But of course that was cleared up as soon as I read that it was next gen :P

Really good and powerful.

Keira7794

Author's Response: Oh, thank you.
Yes, I wanted to make some hints that were not to obvious that it was Albus.
Thank you for saying to flowed really well (:
Yes, I could see how it could be like Lily Potter (1) (;
Thank you so much for the review.

~Sarah
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