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Review:alicia and anne says:
Your way with words is just so brilliant! I had no idea what was going on but the way you described everything painted such a vivid picture in my head I don't think I needed to know what was happening at all.
Was Snape dreaming throughout the whole thing? I liked how he asked if he had tarnished her with his cold hand and trembling hands.
You are a fantastic writer!

alicia and anne

Author's Response: Thank you! I know this is a little obscure, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy the imagery and language, even if I didn't make my meaning totally plain.

Hmm, I don't know if I'd say he was dreaming the whole time. I'm not really sure I know exactly what's going on here, to be honest - haha. To me, these are just some of his deep, dark thoughts, and while it's written as if he's addressing Lily, it's probably not something he would ever actually say to her - just something he would think about, you know? If that makes sense. And as to the "I had a dream" parts - well, they could be actual dreams, or they could just be metaphors for how he views Lily when he's feeling really bitter towards her - like she's a tease, basically.

Thank you so much for reading, and for the review!

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