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Review:LovlyRita says:
Louise!!

I really liked this! you've definitely got a great start here! I'm assuming we're fixing to have a baby daddy battle here, to see who the daddy is? Those are always FUN. :) I really like your descriptions, especially of the nameless guy in the club. Nothin' like a little rebound lovin' to lift your spirits! There were a couple of grammatical things throughout the chapter, but nothing completely major.

I also like how you have Lily and Hugo's relationship. That's nice to see, although you know that I don't read much next gen, so I don't know if that happens often. But I do like to see the two of them close and apparently living together. nice touch!

I'm excited to see where you decide to take this. I'm sure it'll be deliciously scandalous, whatever it is!! :)

Great job!

~LR (Slytherin)

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