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Review:melian says:
This was absolutely chilling. I was entranced, enthralled by every word, but I have to admit it spooked me quite a lot, That's a compliment, by the way, because it's not often I have that reaction to a fanfiction. It took guts to write the Horcrux-making process but what you have here is absolutely believable and plausible,and the physical toll it takes on him - the red eyes - is just right for the scene.

There were so many lines in this that I was just in awe over, like these:
"She could have been great, but now she was only dead."
"He took the ring from his pocket. It, too, was a circle. Everlasting, like the love his mother had offered this worthless Muggle. Infinite, like the power he desired for himself and himself alone. Eternal, like the life he would possess."
"He need not be human any more. He need only be power."
There are many more, but you get the idea.

Really, I'm still holding my breath from this story. Amazing job. Absolutely perfect for the prompt - the circle here really is neverending.

melian (gryffindor)

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