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Review:TallestTower says:
Hello love, hope you're having an amazing birthday!
You deserve one, because you're one talented lady.
I'm really enjoying this, Hannah's character is so strong and I feel really attached to her.

I really loved the detail and the description. I actually liked Aberforth's character in this chapter, I liked his awkwardness and it was almost sad Hannah left while he was distracted, I would have quite liked to see him choke out a goodbye.

I'm really curio about the centre and where things are going to go from here, who else will be there...

And I really like Neville in this ^_^ I'm thinking romantically he might be more nervous, but I'm interested to see your take on it. Hehe, looking forward to the romance already, naturally.

I thought maybe Augusta's conversation with Hannah might have been a tad longer, and only a tad, but perhaps that is all part of the mystery. It's definately gripping. ♥ ♥

Author's Response: Hi hi ♥

I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. As I said in my last reply, Hannah did come quite easily - I think there are probably big elements of her that are part of me too, which always helps - so to know that she's still as strong is a great comfort.

Oh, he'll see her again. He knows that. She's not going forever and she's come to care about the pub so he's pretty sure she'll be back.

Who else is there is a very good question. There are some familiar faces :)

You shall have to wait and see. There's certainly a nervouseness to him but you'll have to wait a while for the romance.

Okay, I'll go back and fix that up if I can. I think I tried to make it longer initially but then it messed up the flow and my dialogue is pretty awful so anything I can chop short, I do :P I will edit ASAP.

Thank you, my lovelyy.

xx


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