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Review:Iloenchen says:
Hello Anders,

I really liked this chapter. We get to see a lot of Remus here which hasn't been the case before. It was especially great to read since I, contrary to Ellie, know that Remus is a werewolf so I understand much better why he wants to protect her from being harmed for something that's not her fault at all.

Also, I've come to like how you're writing Peter. There must have been something great about him or he wouldn't have been part of the Marauders. I hate all stories where he doesn't appear so you've got a huge plus for including him. At times, I can understand why he's friends with the other Gryffindor boys. And yet, you write him so he's always been the odd one, the one who cannot stand up for himself. That's great!

Oh, and Ben's reaction to Ellie offering him a kiss was very good. I would have hated if he had taken that kiss. ;)

I'd write more but I'm too much looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hahahaha. I loved writing Peter in this story! He was such a little perv! I've written characters like that before, but the previous ones have always been funny and endearing; Peter is just plain creepy. I've always pictured young Peter being like Neville Longbottom (before the Fifth Book); lost, left out, and overlooked. But where Neville turns into a very brave and heroic young man, Peter turned into a traitor. I thought it would be an interesting spin on him, so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

And I have a soft spot for Remus. I always felt like he needed a hug or something, so I wanted to try and include him more.

- Anders

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