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Review:Iloenchen says:
Ah, I'm sorry, I should be reviewing more often. I keep reading and forget to tell you how much I like your story. This is one of the most interesting chapters so far, mainly because it shows a character development that Ellie goes through. She's always been the good daughter, never doing anything that will not please her parents. She didn't even date because they requested it! But now that there's something at stake, the lives of many, she's broken out of this stupor and that was so interesting to read. In a moment, the world as she knew it ends and suddenly, she's not the good daughter anymore, she's doing what she believes is right. I really liked that part!

In the last chapters, you always made Ellie say that family was more important than anything else. I never really understood how that came to be. This chapter, you finally tied it all up.

What surprised me a bit was Ellie's father. I would have thought that he felt guilty at having written that list, after all, he had always stood up against the Death Eaters. Surely a part of him must have been happy about having been caught? That doesn't show at all - or maybe he was just too shocked.

Anyway, this is a great chapter and your story is developing nicely so far. I'm going to read on now. :)

Author's Response: I almost had a heart attack when I logged on and saw how many reviews you left me! So I just want to start off by saying thank you for taking the time to write me!

I think that with Isaac's reaction it was a mixture of shock, complete terror (that Arabella would find out about his affair), and a tiny bit of relief that he was caught mixed together. You only really get that one quick glimpse at his emotions though before he's locked away, so all the remorse and regret he has winds up being bottled up inside for a very long time.

- Anders

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