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Review:Blue Flame says:
I think my favorite bit of this had to be Sirius being so blunt and just outright saying it. It seemed so seriously [pun totally intended] IC for him! The characterization for them was all spot on, particularly for Lily. That she tells him not to dare call himself a monster again really was something I could picture her saying. ^^ And the fact she figured it out so quickly first year goes to show the similarities between herself and Hermione.

I also love how you threw in James saying it's his 'furry little problem', and the ending was so sweet! 'No one except a small temperamental red-headed girl and his three nutcase dorm-mates.' This line was my favorite, definitely sounds like an accurate description for them all. ^^

Only one bit of critique: 'Remus Lupin was three years' would probably sound and flow better with 'had been' instead? Just a thought. =) Oh! And the bit where he sometimes wished he had been killed instead of just bitten stood out to me. It just conveyed how terrible the ordeal was and how lonely he must have felt before becoming friends with the Marauders and Lily. =(

Really well done!
-Cappie/Hufflepuff

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