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Review:Blue Flame says:
I always feel so awful for Severus when I read fics like these. =( This was well written and I love the portrayal of Snape as he sounds quite IC. What struck me most was when he says 'he was glad she'd picked Potter'. The fact he felt that James could keep her safe and happy just really reflected how much he loved Lily. She'd left him alone, and yet he still cared for her well being and was selfless enough to admit that. Such a sweet, true love...all ruined by one horrible word. =/ I was surprised at the end to see he'd already joined the death eaters, and it had me thinking of how Lily could have been his tether to the good side.Especially because of the ending sentence-- presenting the picture that he'd been holding at the surface because of his love for her, and sunk low without it. Really makes me feel awful for him. =(

My only bit of critique would be a sentence in the paragraph starting with 'Him bullying'. The second sentence seems like a run-on and is a bit awkward to read, as it feels like it could have broken up to make things flow better.

Other than that, very lovely! ^^

-Cappie/Hufflepuff

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