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Review:SereneChaos says:
Awww. That was also so cute! Something to keep in mind for the future though, is to try to clarify which character is speaking. You have a dialogue heavy chapter here, and it was confusing reading the back and forth--particularly when Molly would speak, but you'd put Thomas' reaction right next to the phrase. Doing so makes it seem as if Thomas was actually the one speaking.

Author's Response: That's a thing I just can't seem to kick, I think it's because I don't want to feel like I'm repeating their names in every sentence. Thanks for the review and I hope you read more.

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