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Review:ashleydelacour says:
What a beautiful story!!

I'm sort of on the fence about whether or not there are only so many things you can do within the world of Harry Potter, in terms of storyline, keeping characters in canon, etc. But wow! You sure did prove me wrong and impressed me beyond words! You're story was incredibly orginial, it kept me on my toes and your ending was precious.

As I've said before in other chapters that I've reviewed on, the way you describe things is awesome, giving me a clear picture in my head with the way you use words.

To be honest, I wasn't such a fan of Natalie at first, but I liked how you developed the triangle, it brought a sense of relatability and pity to Draco that made him seem more human than just a spoiled brat.

Still not sure about the defeating moment of Adria, as I thought you had to kill the person who had orginally created the horocrux. I was kinda banking on Cassius dying, although I wasn't sure on who was going to do it since he seemed to posses such skill.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Writing was well done, word choice wasn't redundant, but fresh and descriptive.

I give a 9/10 because the constant change in POV's kept my head spinning a little, and I felt like the story at times dragged because we were constantly playing catch-up between all the characters.

Besides all that, your five years of hard work certainly paid off! :)

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