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Review:taylorj828 says:
I really liked the chapter, I feel like we've gotten much more into the action and into the driving plot of idea of the story. (o:

Very nice scene with Snape in the beginning, and at last him finally trusting her about the phials. It's very much like Snape that he would immediately distrust, assuming some poison or other Darkness, especially during a time of so much danger, the inside man, having played both sides... But Hermione did well to convince him. (o:

Oh yay, no tomb!! But... drat, she's caught...

As for the flashback scene, I definitely think that, yeah, if he's dying, why not just take the potion? Even if he hadn't tested it! He was going to die anyway! But he didn't! Hurrah Hermione, you made it right!

Aw, it sounds like Snape didn't fancy having Little-Miss-Know-It-All give up her life to save his... Haha..! And yet, I think he does; I think you conveyed very well two sides of his emotions, though one side very, very overwhelmingly hidden and understated.

Great speech from Snape to the Unspeakables! And I like the part where Hermione knows he's furious with her, and yet trying to help her anyway. He did that few times even for Harry, haha! Though I think he helped Hermione much more here than he ever would have helped Harry. :oP

I like the agreement they came to at the end, even if it means Hermione spending two months in Azkaban. It's very interesting for the story, and of course wonderfully 'terrible' that she'll have to stay at Hogwarts (and near Snape!) for the entire next year. (o; Well done on this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. ;) I was very happy with how this chapter turned out... even if its a bit sad.

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