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Review:taylorj828 says:
Me again! I'll see how many reviews I can get through now. (o: Well, I like in the beginning how we see Hermione envisioning Snape working so hard, with the 12 cauldrons of various potions and etc. Lots of good details that made the scene come to life, and a nice connection between Snape's past ad Hermione's present.

Haha, I was really hoping that Hermione was going to try and bring him back! YAY! And also you have nice wording about how if she succeeds it will make all her hard work useless. It's ironic, and rare that someone would desire the very thing that would render their work pointless. Nice turn of phrase. (o:

Wow, making the antidote looks very difficult, especially if even Snape was unsuccessful! And Hermione has only one shot at it! I'm wishing her luck!! (o;

Hm, I do think Hermione's timing with her question about time- turners would have made her seem a bit obvious to McGonagall (who did pick up on it), but then again, Hermione has never been the best at being sneaky, withholding information, or choosing the right timing. Hehe.

Wow, I feel slow! I ever even thought of using a timer-turner to bring someone back to life! But yes I do agree that it must be illegal to do so, or else everyone would do it. Was this actually something once stated in the books, or you came up with it? Very logical.

Also, good explanation of how she got the timer-turner (the Hogwarts' time-turner!)... And then you left us with a cliffie about what happens when she shows up in Snape's headmaster room... Although, I wonder if she was able to choose the exact time of the day to return, or if she chose a completely different day than his last day alive...? I think the next chapter will tell of course! Another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful comments ;) *HUGS*

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