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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow, this was amazing!

You really gave me a different perspective on the Black's childhood. You showed some moments when Bella really wasn't all evil, though I like that she still had some streaks of mean in her. And you managed to portray a much softer side of both sisters, especially Narcissa.

I loved the memories. Apart from being adorable, and then going to disturbing with the last one, they gave a great insight onto the life of the Blacks. You showed that they really were a family, despite having twisted morals.

My one critique of this is that Lucius seemed too nice to me. I just don't think he'd be that caring and involved with Draco. That's just my opinion though :) It was still a really great story!

Happy staff/prefects Friday and thanks so much for the incredible summer! *hugs*
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Hi Naida! Thank you so much for this lovely, amazing review, and I am so sorry for the very late reply!

I'm so glad you liked the way I've written their childhood - Bella is always portrayed as a psychopath, and I love showing a different perspective of things. She is human, like everyone else :3

Ah, thank you! The memories of them as a family were a joy to write, and that last one was fun yet quite sad (I'm a huge Bella fan) :3

Lucius...yes, I've had mixed opinions on that haha :P I appreciate yours, it gives me something to think about :)

Aww thank you for this lovely review, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the Cup! Cheers, darling!

-Lizzie xxx

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