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Review:LadyL8 says:
Hello :D

I just wanted to start by saying that this is the second Rose/Scorpius story I have read, and I really liked it. From what I have seen, most stories about this pairing are while they are at Hogwarts, and about how their families would hate it. I really liked this twist, though. Him being a famous singer, and she a bitter, unemployed girl. It was very different from normal Rose/Scorpius stories, I assume.

You are really good at description. That was obvious. I really admire those who can do that well, cause that is actually what I have most problems with. Description is much harder then it sound, so I admire you for being able to do it so well.

This is the first chapter in a story, and its very hard to say too much about it. Its like an intro to your story, and it does make me interested. For now, all I can say is that you have a really good start. If I should point out one thing I didnt like, then maybe you couldve made her dislike for him a little less obvious (Im talking about the scene where she meets him). You went straight to the point. Maybe she couldve been a little more subtle about it? That is just a small thing, though. It was really great. Please PM me when a new chapter is up. I really want to read more of it :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you think this is an original piece I was hoping for it to be original but i dont really read that pairing much. I'm glad you think i'm doing good with description I try to get it right but sometimes I dont do it justice. Thank you so much for this great review and I will try to remember to send you a pm when the second chapter is up. Thank you!

~Slytherinchica08~

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