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Review:mirasoul says:
Hi! It's mirasoul from the forums, giving you your requested review. Sorry for the lateness. :/

I can honestly say I enjoyed reading this. Your opening was great; I have a thing for rhetorical questions. I love the lighthearted self-absorption you portray Lockhart throughout the majority of the story. It balances out the more serious parts, like the end (which I loved), and keeps the story from becoming too...heavy, if you get what I mean. I especially loved the "under abundance of mirrors" line, haha. You had great tie-ins with the actual Harry Potter story, and I love how you did the confrontation between Lockhart and his past victims. It wasn't too overly-dramatic, but it still had a powerful effect. The way you left off the story leaves the reader guessing as to what might happen next, which, to me, is the perpfect ending. Really, the only concern I can think of is the weird format because there are such large gaps between each paragraph, but I assume that's the website's fault. Happens to my stories all the time.

All in all, great read. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! It's no problem about the lateness!

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this. It appears that I too have a thing for rhetorical questions- I use them in many of my stories. I'm also happy that you liked the ending and Lockhart's characterization. I haven't written a piece yet like him, so I was a little worried about how he would come off.

Thanks as well for the compliments. I have gotten that comment before about odd spacing, but I can never quite seem to fix it. Glad to know I'm not the only one.

Thanks once again for taking the time to leave me such a lovely review!

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