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Review:The Quiet Girl says:
Scorpius: in touch with his emotions. Scorpius: not as in touch with his reproductive common sense. :) I loved this chapter, it was so cute and Scorpius was so sappy. I especially loved the comparison of Scorpius to a sad puppy. Lots of love, lots of emotions, and sometimes very little common sense. I just wanted to give him a hug throughout the whole chapter!

I think the top things that made me smile in this chapter (besides Scorpius) was the parties and the names. The parties seemed so stereotypical of their houses (and I agree with the Slytherin parties- I've read fics with half the attendants are Gryffindors!). Not to mention the characters with the last names of 'Huffington' and 'Slythers.' Very cute, very cliche.

I was just reading this for enjoyment, but I didn't see any typos that popped out at me. So thanks for posting this chapter. Great, now I have to wait for the next one. Oh well. Looking forward to it!

TheQuietGirl, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear you like Scorpius :) He's a bit different that most versions out there. Normally he's very cynical or smart, so I thought it would be fun to put a rather naive version of him in the story!

And I'm glad you liked the party types! Haha I always see the same types of parties in stories, so I decided my story should include those :)

*Sigh of relief* I'm glad you didn't see any obvious typos! I'm not the best speller, so I appreciate when readers point them out to me.

Thanks for the reviews, I'll try to have chapter 4 up soon.
-ronsgirl29


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