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Review:Giola says:
Hi Selene!

I had no idea what to expect when I clicked on this, and I did not see the last line coming at all (I really should have, thinking back...but I didn't). You described the battle scene brilliantly, you have an amazing grasp on Sirius' character and his internal monologue.

His reflection on his life was very well done as well, I didn't find it cliche in the slightest, given the way you've written it. Your style of writing is perfect for this sort of thing, it's simple and you don't try to over-describe things. The last three sentences have stuck with me, whirling around in my head creating a story of Sirius' lost love, which I'm assuming was your intention in leaving it so.

Well done, this is a lovely one shot :)

-Giola
(Slytherin)

Author's Response: Aww thank you Giola!! I tried to make this moment, written and read so many times by fans everywhere, stick out a little without being over the top. I love Sirius dearly so it was a challenge to kill him. All I want to do is make him live a long and happy life.

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