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Review:SereneChaos says:
Your A/N said this chapter was slow, but I actually liked it even better than the first! The change in pov threw me off a little, but otherwise, this was a lovely little chapter.

"On some nights, if I was quiet enough, I could find Gran sitting on the porch with her feet elevated on the rail with her stockings hanging loosely around her ankles..." This is possibly my favorite sentence fragment in this chapter. It's such good imagery.

You've got Neville down nicely, and while I would have liked to see a little more noticeable plot developing in this chapter, I still think it was nicely done. :)

-SereneChaos, Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the imagery and I just have to say that I love your vocabulary--you really know what you are talking about!

At this point most of the action plot takes place with Isabel, but I will try to incorporate more events into the others'.

Thanks for the feedback!!

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