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Review:melian says:
Poor Avery. I can only imagine what was done to him after he delivered the wrong lunch ... and only you would think of having something like that as being cause for punishment. Brilliant. :D I do pity poor Severus though, having a blunderhead like that assigned to help him with something as delicate as potions work. Seems that Karkaroff doesn't really understand how fragile some potions can be.

Have I said before how much I like your version of Sybill? Trying to make some spare cash to supplement her teaching salary but getting wasted on the booze instead, and Severus having the guilt of being responsible in a way. She's ballsy, though, getting him to pay her because he scared a customer away. No matter what I think of her methods, she's clearly having some success.

The tracking charm the Ministry didn't know about is also a stroke of genius. AS is this line:
"Is it Dark Magic?"
It's a sandwich."
LOL. Seriously, that line makes my day. (Yes, I know. My days are easily made.) I liked Dorcas' suspicions but then her decsion that she has to trust him anyway.

As for that final scene, well what can I say except .. .Avery, you dunce!

melian (gryffindor)

Author's Response: It's Mel... again! *squeals*

We always see Death Eaters doing all kinds of horrible things and I've always assumed that, as in every organization, there's got to be some dead weight they have to deal with. See, and this is why you're the character relationship therapist, because now I find myself wondering WHY Karkaroff wouldn't know that Avery is completely unsuitable for the task he's assigned. Blunderhead, indeed!

I loved how Sybill was portrayed in the HP movies! I find her actually quite creepy. She happened to survive the first war somehow, and I just couldn't picture her tea leaves telling her to sit tight at Hogwarts until things blew over. These people had lives, right?

Genius? *looks around* Where? Oh, but I love the sandwiches, as you are well aware! Dorcas isn't stupid. But she can't always have it all together either.

Avery... *shakes head* Don't make me a sandwich either.



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