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Review:melian says:
Again, I can't say enough good things about this. I really wish Dorcas could have had her fruity drink at Marlene's NYE party and been spared the exposure to Graves, but then if that had been the case we wouldn't have had a story, would we?

Dialogue in this chatper is absolutely spot on. You had the girly conversation with Marlene (whose character, I might add, is superb), the altercation with Josef and then the discussion with Snape, where she dared to teach him a thing or two about Potions. The nerve of the girl! THen again, he reached out to the Order and then insulted the person they sent to help him, so he's not exactly smelling of roses at the moment either. However, they've settled what differences they might have had and it looks like some kind of working partnership might actually come about. Who'd have thunk it?

Totally gripping chapter. Cant' wait to read on. :D

melian (gryffindor)

Author's Response: Haha! Maybe in the AU version, Dorcas can go have her fruity drink at Marlene's and meet her contact over there and Graves can get hauled off for trespassing. Hmm... that doesn't work on so many levels. Unless... nah. Kidding. Nutterfluff.

Aww, you like Marlene? Dorcas has to have a bit of nerve, given her job and who she has to deal with.

Gripping? Really? You are simply too kind! Thank you for another lovely review! *sends chocolate*


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