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Review:melian says:
Pix!! I have FINALLY made it here to review! Though I already knew how good your story is. :D

I can't say enough good things about your characterisation. Karkaroff, Malfoy, Netterheim, Snape, Dorcas - they're all really well fleshed out characters, with their own mannerisms, foibles, likes and dislikes. I loved how Netterheim had already refused to look at Karkaroff's book, and was really displeased when he saw Snape had it (though the German expletives sounded less than savoury, hahaha). The descriptions are spot on, too - the warehouse, the Potions shop,the Ministry - all sound just right for both the time and the situation, ie the war.

I also really like the thought processes, how Snape isn't so sure he's picked the wrong side after all, if Dorcas is stuck as an Assistant, with her talents. It's nice that he remembered her talents, too, even if it was just a grudging admiration of her Potions skills and gratitude that she didn't pick on him too much at school. Nice one. :D

Anyway I can't stop here all day - there are 5 mor echapters to review!

melian (gryffindor)

PS Do you think I could start up a business for character relationship therapy? It'd pay more than I'm getting now ... ;)

Author's Response: Gifts! You've left me gifts! Thank you!

Oh, mighty character relationship therapist, you grace me with your words of wisdom! I think you'd make a fortune at starting up such a business.

Can I pay you in virtual cake?

I didn't want to have a whole cast of OCs floating around this story, but when Netterheim muscled his way into my brain, I couldn't pass him up. Foibles: I like that word!

Severus' thoughts... I'm glad you liked them! I couldn't have him completely convinced of anything, now could I?

Wow, thank you for such a wonderful review!



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