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Review:Akussa says:
Hello!!

I couldn't keep away from this story too long... It is getting better and better with every chapter that passes. I really enjoy how these chapters are action packed and yet, you always manage to put in a moment of slower emotion without even breaking the flow of your story.

Now that we are discovering more about Teddy and the person he is, I'm beginning to like him a lot. He isn't just a pretty-boy who's role was to be the trigger of Raven's flight anymore. Now we can see that he is a full-fledge character that might actually get the story moving into his own direction.

The fight beween the wolves was good though, not as good as the list fight scene you wrote. Did you say before that they are wolves or was it just a guess I had made? Because I'm really trying to figure out why I wasn't surpise by this revelation. What I'm not sure I understand though, is how she can change into a werewolf when the moon isn't out and without it being painful for her.

Great work once again, I love how fast the story is moving and how original it is.

Akussa (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: That was already explained ;) It's because of the magic Auxilry used to make the Fire-Eaters, because Raven was the first one she made her magic was flawless. After Raven, she became magically tired and never could make a Fire-Eater as good as Raven.

Glad you like! Chapter 7 will be up soon :)


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