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Review:Christine_Nighting says:
This is a very emotional piece. I love how realistic Althea's emotions are. I'm dying to know what happens when she tells Sirius that she is Kelly Derry, though...

I'm so glad you made a sequel! Ebb and Flow was amazing! I've been checking back everyday to see if you've gotten a new chapter out.

-Christine (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Althea does go through an emotional whirl in this chapter. I sometimes cringe at what Althea is thinking and feeling and wonder if it is too over the top.

I'm glad you're enjoying the sequel. I worry that readers would be turned off by the premise. It isn't very action heavy--it's more dialogue driven and character driven. It is a continuation of Ebb and Flow, but a story in its own right. I'm very happy you enjoyed Ebb and Flow, too...thank you :)

~~emberlivi


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