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Review:Prongs05JP says:
:O No, Hermione died! Wow, this was such a nice little fic! Well, not nice, they all died, but you know what I mean... I suppose this would've been how things worked out if Voldemort won, eh? We're kinda lucky he didn't. I thought this was really good, especially the bit where Voldemort died - or did he? I know this is weird, but I read some double meaning in there where Hermione imagined herself killing him, but at the end of the day all hope was actually lost and he just killed her.. but she kind of *imagined* he didn't, if you know what I mean?

Or maybe that double meaning wasn't there. And I'm an idiot. :D

Either way, I did really love this! My only criticisms would be not having a new paragraph for speech, and perhaps the rushed nature - I think if you took a little more time writing it, added more detail it could be a really fantastic story! :)

7/10 Fab!
--Nick xx

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