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Review:Prongs05JP says:
Aww, that was pretty good. :) I could really feel how angry Ginny was that Harry had sacrificed himself like that - and she has every right to be angry, right? Especially since she'd probably have preferred it if he said some kind of goodbye to her. Harry's comment in the beginning was pretty brilliant though, a very Harry thing to think XD But I couldn't help but feel Harry would be so much more... Idk, happy after defeating Voldemort, haha!

My only criticism is perhaps it seems quite rushed, maybe if you spent a little more time over it, wrote more, it could be more detailed and just make it a better story overall? :)

But I did quite enjoy this, it's a great little story, well done!

7/10
--Nick xx

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