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Review:Prongs05JP says:
Hey, this is pretty exciting! What a great read! :) I've always seem all those stories about Harry's younger sister, or younger brother, but this is the first time I've seen something about an *older* sister - and its pretty good! Poor girl, though. And more of a shame I don't know her name XD But my favourite bit has to have been the beginning - you captured childish jealousy and love very well there.

My only criticism would be that I'm not.. entirely sure what happened when Voldemort came. She followed her mum, but Lily threw her against a wall? XD That's a *biiit* mean, a little OOC for Lily? Or maybe I just got it wrong, and that wasn't what happened at all... haha, oops. :')

Either way, I still thoroughly enjoyed this! If it carries on, I'd love to read the rest and see how she survives with Voldemort. Thanks for writing it!

8/10 Fab! :)
--Nick xx

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End of an Era Review Extravaganza: House Cup 2011
Forum Name: Prongs05JP
House: Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. About the part where Lily threw her against the wall, well, she didn't mean to hurt the girl. (Come to think of it, I haven't mentioned her name, have I? It's Faith, btw) Ever since Harry was born, Lily has been under pressure because of the prophecy and now, when the time came, she was unable to accept it. She does love Faith, only not so much having concentrated on Harry so much to make up for lost time if she ever did lose him... does that make sense?

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