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Review:leannemariesnape says:
This was a really interesting piece. I never really thought about what the Malfoys would be doing after the battle. This is a really realistic account of what could have happened though. I thought that it was good how she was haunted by her sisters death, and you portrayed the emotion of this appropriately. I also liked how she compared Bellatrix's touch to Andromeda, and how Andromedas touch was warm whereas Bellatrix's was not. The kindness that the Malfoys are given is really nice, too. Your use of senses, particularlly in the last paragraph was really nice, and ensured that the reader felt as if they were acutally at the scene. Similarlly, I liked her grief for Severus, which I think was really nice because it implied how she had gained a feeling of comfort from Sev being around.
Well done, this is a nice piece. :)
Leanne (leannemariesnape, Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review! I am pretty proud of this piece, and I'm glad that all of the emotion came through well and the imagery worked for you. Thanks for taking the time to read it! :)

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