Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Debra20 says:
Happy Slytherin Day!!

Only three reviews? Are you serious? This story deserves so much more. It's so touching, so moving, so heart breaking! Yes, you did bring tear to my eyes.

You stayed so true to Sirius's character it's almost frightening. I can't tell you enough how much this means to me. It's always so hard writing about the internal thoughts and feelings of a character without dangerously swaying on the edge of out of character-ness. Especially more prominent character of whom we know pretty much. So I am beyond pleased by this story on this side.

The flow was great, every detail fell into it's rightful place and his feelings were deep and yet calm. Calm with the foreboding of death. I really enjoyed your idea of his life flashing before his eyes seconds before he dies. I have always imagined that's what happens when you're about to die but are still conscious about you. I loved his calmness. His stability even in death. A wonderful, wonderful piece!


House Cup 2011, End of an Era Review Extravaganza
Forum name: Debra20
House: Gryffindor

Author's Response: My first reaction is to say I didn't mean to make you cry! But at the same time I figure thats a good thing! Staying true to Sirius through this piece is very important to me because ultimately he will do something very un-Sirius. So making sure the rest of it read and felt like Sirius is very important to me. Thank you very much for the review Debra20 :)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 226
Submit Report: