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Review:nightingale14 says:
I loved this fic because I feel like I can relate to it so much; I too must spend about half of the day on my piano, and when I go on vacation (as I am now), and cannot play, I start 'playing' pieces; drumming them on tables, on my legs; everywhere. It annoys my mother to no end :). The jumpy time-thing only added to that elevated feel of the story; all was not revealed in the begining, but was later revealed in the story so that at the end you could piece everything together. That's really hard to do, so kudos for that. Really nice job; it was a piece that can only be compared to a piano piece; dark and light, beautifully done.

Author's Response: Ooh, I do that all the time too! Like, mime playing the piano on any available surface. I even once drew a keyboard into my notebook so I could whip it out and 'play' it for lols but, you know, that's a bit weird. Uh, moving on.
Curiously, my one regret about this story is the jumpy-time thing. I attempted a rewrite (and never finished it) with a more linear narrative. Never know if I'll finish it or not, but...ah well. I'm glad you liked it here - gives me hope that this story is still okay!
Thank you for that comparison ♥ I suppose that's what I was aiming for. Not something overly dramatic or fluffy, but something that rested between the two, with darker bits and lighter bits - something more realistic, I guess. That's why I suppose I shunned a happy ending. But thank you so much ♥ ♥ ♥

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