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Review:MJ says:
The story was very well written, but the inclusion of Daphne seemed needless. Maybe you didn't intend to write it this way, but what seemed apparent was that it wasn't just affection that Harry felt for Ginny, but deep love. It could have been a beautiful love story and I'd have given in 10/10 had it not been for the divorce. Somehow, the whole bit about their love fading and Harry marrying Daphne seemed forced.
The connection between Harry and Ginny was beautiful and that is why I kept asking myself, why did you make them part ways? Daphne, whom you actually paired him with was like a prop, wouldn't have made a difference to the story had you not included her.
On a good note, the ending almost made me cry...I just wish you had kept it h/g and not what you did to it:(

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you think it was well-written.

I recently read an article about ex-spouses caring for their exes with Alzheimer's and that's where I got the inspiration for this story. I wanted to show the deep friendship Harry felt for Ginny and I thought that Daphne would help to show how Harry had moved on as well as provide support for him.

However, I can see where you're coming from. Daphne wasn't needed, persay, but I wanted her there. I'm sorry it seemed forced to you- that wasn't my intention at all. I am glad that you liked the connection between Ginny and Harry, though.

I will think about the inclusion of Daphne, though. Thanks so much for your input.


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