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Review:adluvshp says:
hi!!

wow, this is the best second-person I have read so far. I read only a few second person narratives because generally the writer cannot pull it off properly. They always get me confused. But this was brilliant. The flow was awesome, everything fell into place and it wasn't confusing at all.
Lily's emotions at the beginning, with the running away and all, were described perfectly. It was some brilliant writing I must say.
Severus' paragraph in the end almost made me cry. The way it was written was so intense and touching. I truly felt sad. His bitterness for James also showed through all the pain which was a realistic touch.
The fact that Lily always wore the necklace Sev gave her was so moving. I truly could feel the emotional turmoil taking place in your story.
I think this was an amazing idea and brilliantly written. Everything was perfect.

10/10

great job!!

cheers!
AD


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end of an era review extravaganza house cup 2011
Forum Name: AditiDraco95
House: SLYTHERIN

Author's Response: Hey AD!
Thanks so much, this is quite an old piece of mine (I actually have trouble remembering what it's even about, that's how old it is), but I'm glad you liked it. It was my first foray into second person (and my more recent attempts have yet to be posted, if ever). It was inspired by a challenge, and it just...ended up in 2nd POV. It was a challenge, and I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review :)

-Giola


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