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Review:Akussa says:
Hello dearest!

This was such a sweet heartwarming story. I just love how you put words on Ron's difficult feelings (I hardly think he would have been able to do it himself!!) and show how much his love has matured.

I like the idea that Harry might have gotten the wrong idea about what had happened the night before. Sure, more than these two, Harry knows how they relly feel about each other but it was nice to imagine that Ron might be getting a clearer idea as well. His infatuation was lovely and so believable. Oh the number of nights I spent looking at my boyfriend sleep next to me; just looking at him because for once, I had all the time in the world to do it. It is one of the best feeling in the world, isn't it?

I really loved this little glimpse and especially to have it from Ron's point of view. Great, wonderfully poetic story, I loved it!

Akussa (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, Ron's feelings are somewhat difficult to write - he's my favorite character, and I think I understand him pretty well, and I love writing him, but when it gets down to the actual emotions and thoughts in his head, it's hard to articulate them without coming off as unrealistic.

I'm glad you could relate in a way - I was worried at first that this fic would just come off as totally creepy (a la Edward-watching-Bella-sleeping-creepiness). But I'm glad you enjoyed this. :-)

Thanks so much for this great review!

Melanie


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