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Review:ekroman says:
Hi there :) Here I am reviewing yet another lovely chapter :) and I have a single age thingy for you again. Hope you don't mind :)
Arthur Weasley's oldest child Bill is at least 8 years older than Harry, because his younger brother Charlie had already left Hogwarts when Harry started, making him at least 7 years older than Harry. We know that James (and Lily) was 21 when Harry was born, making them 13 when Bill was born. As you put it here, Arthur is only 2 years older than the Marauders and would therefore have been 15 when Bill was born. You can find his real age and birthday at the Harry Potter Wikia. Might I suggest making this one of Arthur's brothers? We don't know anything about them other than they are his brothers. There are two if you are wondering. We never learned there names or ages and the Muggle loving thing could very well be a family thing :)

and then I am sitting here thinking 'ouch! ouch! ouch!'. You see, I find it quite ironic that you chose 'Doloroso' as the incantation for this counter curse, as it is also the name of the Cruciatus Curse in Danish (the Danish incantation is 'Dolor')

But you did a wonderfull job, and I hope you update soon! I'm looking forward to see where you can and will take this :)

I'm glad you could use my help from the last review :)

10/10

Author's Response: Actually, this chapter was denied because the chapter title wasn't appropriate for 15+, which is what they're supposed to be, so the person who denied me actually told me the same thing! I need to change it, but I haven't had time :) Thank you though, and definately let me know if I have any more age problems (becuase, honestly, sometimes I just slip up and become too lazy to research ages, which is a bad thing on my part) Thanks for the review!

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