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Review:gingersnape says:
I really liked this chapter because we got to see Lucy doubting Severus and her family's reaction to it all and so much happened! I think what I liked best about Lucy's reaction to seeing that Severus was a death eater was that deep down she knew it was coming and it was more of her trying to face the inevitable about being part of her family and in with the darker crowd. I also think you captured Snape's telling her about what joining the Dark Lord could offer him, and them, perfectly. There was the fear of what might happen if he didn't, and the allusion that everything would work out, and it was really just very well done all around! Bravo on that. :)

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted it to be real, somewhere in between "Oh, it's fine, I love you, no big deal" and "Oh my gosh, get away from me forever"! Haha :) I definitely tried to create a sense of dread within her, seeing as the whole Voldemort thing is something she's a bit familiar with.

Thanks again! I so love your reviews! :)

academica


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