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Review:_Leo_ says:
'Fred Weasley is lying in a box.' There it is again, and it draws a beautiful connection to the last chapter.
George and Molly were heart-breaking in their mourning, and I admire you for attempting that scene. It couldn't have been easy to write.
Your descriptions were once again easy to picture, I especially liked Fred with Josephine, like in this sentence: '"You're so full of it, Jo!" he shakes his head and lets out my favourite laugh in a single booming 'Ha!' rubbing the sore spot before tossing the dessert back at me. I dodge it expertly.'
Well done, and I hope there's more soon :)

Leo (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Hello again, Leo! And thank you for another amazing review! Eep! ^.^

I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed that repetition and connection to the first chapter! And as difficult as it was to write the funeral scene, I'm so relieved to hear that both George and Molly really got to you, thank you!

LOL It was a lot of fun trying to write the relationship between Fred and Josephine and I'm so glad that it worked for you! And I'm so excited that I could paint a picture for you with my writing! That's such a great compliment, I'm so happy! ^.^

Thank you so much for this lovely review! Chapter 3 is half complete and I was working on it last night, so I hope to have an update for you soon! *hugshugshugs*


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