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Review:gingersnape says:
Wow, so much happened in this chapter! I really could feel the dislike oozing from the letter telling Lucy not to go home! It definitely feels like you've characterized the Malfoys perfectly! I also really liked your Narcissa because she wasn't outright mean, and I think it will be good for Lucy to have someone who at least would want to see Lucy every once in a while in the family. And then the breakup and Severus thing, wow! It was all so well written! Another great chapter!

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my characterization of the Malfoys. I wanted to set them up as antagonists for Lucy without going over the top. I'm a big Narcissa fan, so I try to write her as a complex character whenever the occasion presents itself.

Thanks for all of your very thoughtful reviews. I hope you get a chance to check out my more recent work as well, and I'm very excited to see chapter three of your story! :)

academica


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