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Review:gingersnape says:
D'aww, gotta love some Lucy/Severus! And the line about the stomachache and that he would be there... so wonderful! I liked how you touched on their personal problems in a way that definitely helped me connect to Lucy and Snape without making them engulf everything else that was happening in the chapter. There have been some times when I've felt like the language used in the dialogue is a little modern, but other than that I don't have much cc for you! As always, wonderfully written and you have very likable characters. I can't wait to see what else you have in store!

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: The language may indeed be a little modern. Since I wrote this one, I've tried to work a little harder to actually imagine characters in the midst of conversation in order to figure out what 'sounds best' coming out of their mouths.

I'm also glad you like my characterization. I aim to please! :)

Thanks again!

academica


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