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Review:gingersnape says:
Hehe, I usually don't like Snape/OCs, but I think there is something about this that works. I forgot to mention in my last review, but I was a little surprised they were doing Potions in their common room. After thinking about it, I don't see why not, but it still felt a little out of place. And I smiled when he handed her the vial in case things didn't work. The last line was great, as I thought it was a nice way to take the chapter full circle, with it starting with him thinking about her, then not remembering her name, and then going back to thinking about her. If that made any sense! Another well written chapter!

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose it is a little strange, isn't it? Perhaps it would have made more sense to have them meeting in an empty dungeon somewhere. I'll keep that in mind if I write more Potions-related stuff in the future, thanks!

Thank you once more for a great review :)


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