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Review:gingersnape says:
Oooh, Potions help with Severus, eh? I really liked how you characterized Snape, and how he was willing to share his secrets for Lily. It struck me as odd that he would give them away, but then I went, "oh? oh," and everything fell into place. Another great chapter and I can't wait to read more about how this whole potions thing turns out. Hopefully that will help her, but if not, she sure will be in trouble with no NEWT Potions! Again, I really liked how you wrote the chapter and I think that although usually beefing chapters up makes them better, I really like having the shorter chapters as I think they fit the story better. :) *skips off to chapter 3*

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to characterize how much he isolates himself from everyone else, especially those that he feels are beneath him, in a way. Fortunately, he doesn't always feel that way about poor, confused Lucy.

Thanks for another sweet review :)

academica


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