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Review:ladybella says:
Hey there!

This chapter again made me laugh! I love your use of wit, which tends to be taking its form from Lily which is nice as i always think she is a very under rated character.

Characterisation of Snape was very good! And Lucy seems likable and funny! She also doesnt come across Mary-sueish at all so great job on that front!

All in all very enjoyable.
Well done!
Ladybella.

Author's Response: Hey again!

I'm glad you liked my characterization of Snape, since I tried not to take him *too* far out of canon just to make him into the romantic hero. And I'm always worried about writing the dreaded Mary-Sue, so I'm very, very happy that I succeeded in avoiding that with Lucy.

Thanks for all of your wonderful reviews! :)

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