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Review:ladybella says:
hey there!

Great first chapter! You seem to have a great way with first chapters! What is your secret? I always find them the hardest to write!

I really liked seeing your take on writing humour as i've yet to see that yet! I enjoy reading humour the most and I love how you do it without being over the top and in your face about it!

For example, "Besides, he's probably available on weekends as well." That made me laugh!

Well done and thanks for another good read! :)
Ladybella

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm not sure. I sometimes feel that my work goes downhill after I do the first chapter, haha :) I think maybe it's because I get so excited about writing a new story, and everything is all fresh and new in my mind. Thanks for the compliment!

Yeah, Lily's got some moments of real humor in this one. Gotta love her! :) I'm glad you think I did it well, because I don't write it particularly often and I especially like to get feedback on things I don't do all the time.

Thanks for the review!

academica


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