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Review:C L Rampton says:
Oh, what a tense and intriguing prologue!
I can't wait to carry one reading this novel, I'm so interested to see where it goes and what direction you take it in.
I love the way you set the scene and your descriptions/explanations of this new way of living.
Hopefully you will keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the rest - good luck! :D

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing as well! (: It always makes my day to get a real review!

The first chapter will move on to the perspective of a couple different characters (did you see how many characters there were in the awesome banner?!) but I'll bring it around to Rosetta soon. (:

Thanks so much! I feel as a writer, descriptions are something that can make or break a story. And I've been trying to get better at them! :)

I'm trying (read: struggling) to find time to write, but it's coming, I swear! ;)

Thanks again!

~VioletBlade


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