Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:leannemariesnape says:
This was really cool. It was as though it was slightly hazy- as though we were really reminiscing with her. Obviously, her guilt was with her until the end of her life, and I think that you portrayed this appropriately. I felt sorry for her throughout the story, and also felt so bad for her when Rita Skeeter entered the scene. The section with Ariana was really interesting, also. I liked how you described her- you made it seem as though she was almost a ghost, which was really good. Another thing I liked was that last sentence. It wasnt obvious, and we don't get a full idea of exactly who the murderer is- however, we do know from reading Deathly Hallows! Anyway, this was a really cool fic, which I really enjoyed.
Leanne (leannemariesnape, Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
This was written for the first challenge I joined so I'm always really happy when I recieve a review for it :)

I always love the way that we can develop the minor characters and find out who they are. I imagine Bathilda as someone who once was very strong and confident but now has lost parts of her memory and is very fragile.

The part with Ariana came into my mind the very first time I read about her.

Thank you again :)

*huggles*


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 690
Submit Report: