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Review:lia_2390 says:
I know I'm going to be absolutely in love with this story.

The premise behind it is gold. When everything is looking up for one sister, things are going downhill for the other for Lucy Weasley has lost her sight.

Her reaction to the breakup was not out of the ordinary, at least not for her. I don't think it would've been in her nature. What indeed would be the point of crying and begging if he'd already made up his mind. I suppose he didn't know her as well as he thought he did if he waited around long enough, expecting her to lose it.

What I love most about this first chapter is how relatable it is. This is why Lucy was my favourite from 'One and Only'. I daresay as the story progresses, she would learn, as we all will.

Would you say she's become cynical after seeing all the things around her fall apart? I think so. But I also wonder if she's scared, hence her wanting to run away.

Another lovely opening and I'm glad I caught it this time!

Lia
(Slytherin)

Author's Response: Oh, lovely. I'm so happy you liked this ♥

Exactly that. I think she's so confused by what she's feeling, and I didn't even think much about her reaction to the breakup but you're absolutely right. She wouldn't want to show weakness; it's somewhat similar to Molly who holds it in, though she shows - to an extent - that she's upset. Lucy never would.

It amazed me in 'One and Only' that you considered Lucy relatable. I'm not sure why, since I'm more of a Lucy than a Molly or Victoire, but she never struck me as someone that people would relate to. Of course I'm glad that you do!

I think she's always been cynical but the way things around her have broken down definitely exacerbated it. She's also scared, yeah. I read this review quickly before I went out last night and what you said definitely played heavily on my mind. Molly ran away because she was frightened of what she felt, and that's pretty much the same reason Lucy has done so. It's slightly different fear but there are parallels between the two stories, definitely.

Thank you so much, lovely! I'm working my way slowly through the second chapter now; I don't think it'll be a quickly updated story, sadly. Lucy's character's giving me issues at the moment but I'll get there.

♥
xx

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