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Review:alias093001 says:
This was really sweet. Four girls of Veela blood all having love touch them in different ways.

Fleur, the love of a man: Chances are that this is how Bill and Fleur first met. It was also the most realistic; Fleur saw Bill as the first man to look past her beauty and see the witch underneath.

Gabrielle, the love of a child: Out of all the sections, this seemed the most different; mostly because the way you portrayed her is such a sharp contrast from what we know of her from canon. You showed a side of Gabrielle that I think probably would have cropped up over the years after being protected from everything that happened in England.

Victoire, the love of a friend: The friendship that Teddy and Victoire have, I can see where the basis of their future relationship would come from. And, Victoire's want to sneak on the train, not wanting to be left behind, reminds me of Lily in the epilogue.

Dominique, the love of flying: The relationship that Ginny and Dominique have is rather sweet. They share a certain connection that no one else seems to understand.

The fact that each section flowed right into the next only seemed to add to the story. This could have easily been divided into chapters and it still would have worked.

alias093001, Slytherin.

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you so much for stopping by. You really got the feel of the piece right.

Fleur: Really glad I got this right, in your eyes. I have never read/thought about that pairing apart from this story.

Gabirelle: I suppose we dont know much about her, considering she was only a child in GOF. I hoped this would be a realistic rendering of the character though :D

Victoire: I really wanted to stress the "friendship" part of their love, which obviously developed into more!

Dominique: This was my favourite. I'm glad you liked it. Dominique goes on to share that connection with Ginny and Lily in "Sources" :D

Thanks again, delighted you liked it x


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