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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
Aw, I love Teddy/Victoire stories, and I particularly like this one because it's told from Teddy's POV instead of the usual Victoire's.

I think you got Teddy spot on. As a young child, he didn't like girls, and I'll guess Victoire wouldn't have liked him either. ;) Teddy is so cute when he sees Vic on her birthday and goes all tongue tied and shy. And as he grew up, he fell more and more in love with Vic.

The twist was harsh and unexpected and I definitely didn't see it coming. But once I understood, I realised how much you'd hinted towards it throughout the story. Very clever. :) When Teddy realised the truth, I could feel his heart break. You made Victoire quite a shallow character which suited the story well too.

You've done a brilliant job on this story! :D

-Sophia
orderofthephoenix (Ravenclaw)

Author's Response: I get, not one, but two reviews! You're amazing! I didn't want this to be like a lot of the other Teddy/Victorie stories where they grow up together, but I do love the "love at first sight" type thing, so I'm glad that was conveyed! And I really tried to lead up to the twist at the end, and make it a surprise at the same time, so thanks so much! These reviews have really been amazing! Thank you!
-Naida

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