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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
It would seem as though everything has a way of sorting itself out despite initial impressions which had me assuming I'd been completely off the mark when I thought that would be the chapter the moment they would realise they need to be together would occur, but in a lot of ways I'm glad it wasn't. I love a good cliff-hanger! (Quite possibly from watching far too many dramatic television shows...) I just love how it all came together and it seemed as though there really is so much more to Sirius than I first assumed.

I imagine it would be difficult living with a group of girls giggling behind you as you walked about the castle, not to mention throwing themselves at you at any available opportunity! Again, I pity Sirius, not just for everything he has been through but for what he continues to put up with.

I love the genuine concern and friendship he has formed with Laura, it's natural and works so perfectly. Their conversations flow beautifully, and I never really want them to end when reading (and they say I'm not romantic) it's one of those perfect relationships which has grown ever so slowly into something so beautiful and amazing, it's truly been amazing to watch it unfolding as I've read through this.

Forwards I go!

- Ash (InTheShadowsIDwell)

Author's Response: You know, I'm quite fond of this chapter. I didn't want to string the misunderstanding out for too long, but 2000-odd words seemed to work quite nicely. As for characterisation, you've probably guessed that I got a bit sick of the one-dimensional Sirius you see portrayed so often and tried to give him the depth that JKR hinted at, so I'm glad you like how I've gone about that. As for the relationship, well I think I've said before that I wanted slow, steady and believable, so again thank you because it sounds like I managed that okay. *beams*

thanks again, Mel

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